http://Petermoncrieff.bandamp.com/ admin@bandamp.com http://forum.bandamp.com/Audio_Review/808.html It's called that because I recorded it at 19:15, I played it on the keyboard, and my age is 14. I just recorded this on my mp3 player today! (24/07/05). Tell me what you think! Sun, 24 Jul 2005 09:40:36 -0400 http://forum.bandamp.com/Audio_Review/6423.html Good name eh? lol. This is a song I want to work on with TLS so we'll see where it goes. I'm really looking for ideas to develop it from here. Thanks Sat, 17 May 2008 16:02:55 -0400 http://forum.bandamp.com/Audio_Review/5646.html Tell me like it is.. vocals flat or not? =/ We'll seeeeee. Lyrics: And if we take the long road Back the way we came I will just guide your hands As we just make our way And I will lead you past Where we had got before And I won't see you cause Of the fog in your heart Go back where you came It don't matter any way I don't see what I saw before You have changed and so have I Go back where you came It don't matter any way If I think back A year ago This was not what I had ever thought of And as I think right back Right back right to the start This was Never how I'd imagined it to be I thought we would be together forever But then you turned it around Go back where you came It don't matter any way I don't see what I saw before You have changed and so have I Go back where you came It don't matter any way If I think back A year ago This was not what I had ever thought of And you won't find me And you won't find me Missing you And this is the most I've thought about it I won't change for you Wed, 31 Oct 2007 18:54:51 -0400 http://forum.bandamp.com/Audio_Review/6210.html Hi Guys It's been a while. This is the rock song I've been working on so far. Some people in America are recording it for me for $125. This is what we've got so far. I think: I think I'd prefer the lead guitar to be a little higher in mix.. In the intro when the rhythm guitars come in I think maybe they could be a bit quieter? It might just be because I'm used to hearing it without a lead guitar. What do you think? Also in the chorus as well. I'd love to hear the lead guitar standing out just a bit more. Don't know what you think. And the vocals are a bit high in the mix do you think? Also I'd like to add some backing vocals.. if anyone has any ideas please feel free to download the song and add something over the top. Or if you don't want to do that just say what you think here. Thanks guys. LYRICS: Everyday after school I think of all things I should have said to you I should have told you Third times the charm But I'm not sticking around Too hear your lies again I should have said You said you're sorry Too many times before Now I can't believe Your stories any more You said you're sorry Too many times before Now I can't believe Your stories any more I wish I knew 3 years ago Why I started to Fall in love with you What made me Want to be with The one that I would Grow to hate You said you're sorry Too many times before Now I can't believe Your stories any more You said you're sorry Too many times before Now I can't believe Your stories any more And after all of this All of this You still come crawling back to me And then when you're done When you're done It all comes rushing back to me You said you're sorry Too many times before Now I can't believe Your stories any more You said you're sorry Too many times before Now I can't believe Your stories any more Wed, 19 Mar 2008 16:51:36 -0400 http://forum.bandamp.com/Audio_Review/3875.html New Piece of Music. Mon, 18 Dec 2006 14:44:28 -0500 http://forum.bandamp.com/Audio_Review/5623.html *** READ FIRST*** lol ok so I've been working on singing after recieving super bad reviews about it from another site (def not this one), and I'll now copy and paste a few of them :) : (All about "The Boy on The Front Page") Review in quotes, followed by the score they gave me. "Vocally- I think you need a lot of work! You need to firstly pace yourself! You need to not force it out. When you are going on that "You'll wish that...." its being forced out and I know all your trying to do is devulge some emotion! You can do that without sounding bad. You also would go too low and be lost behind the music and often have many pitch problems and fall flat! Lots of work to get there but you have the potential because you wrote a beautiful song and the music itself is beautiful!" (9/10) "More needs to be in the song to bring it to life, its empty, your not singing with all your might, more needs to be in the track to make you sound professional, this isn't professional, people want to hear good quality music, not music they cant listen to." (4/10) "Oh Dear !!! - Did your mum tell you you could sing? Get some lessons stop making my ears bleed" (1/10) "The vocals on this track really don't work. The music isn't too bad but the lyrics and singers voice aren't of a quality that could be sold to anyone. I think that if this individual got singing lessons then he may be more successful." (1/10) "I think that this is ok" (6/10) "This track has an excellently arranged soundtrack, but the vocals are highly unappealing. The volume level goes up and down in the vocal tone, and this doesn't help much. I don't see this going very far..." (4/10) "this track could use alot of work on the vocals on this track. the lyrics are good though and the instrumentals have great dyanmics keep it up." (6/10) "this was a pretty original song, quite creative and also the performed by the group. i liked the piano in this, although the vocals werent as good as the rest of the tune." (7/10) Overall, after all of those comments, I decided to let my singing out a bit more, and I decided to stand up when I'm singing! I can't believe all of my previous songs I did sitting down.. Hmm. Anyway, all comments and criticism welcome :). Thu, 25 Oct 2007 08:53:31 -0400 http://forum.bandamp.com/Audio_Review/6566.html Cover.. haha I saw other people posting covers so I thought why not.. so don't ban meee pleaseeeeeeeee :) I like it. Mon, 14 Jul 2008 09:36:35 -0400 http://forum.bandamp.com/Audio_Review/4946.html Well here it is. This song is nearly 3 years in the making. 2 years to write, 1 year to actually get the CD with the song on! I wrote the song during my GCSE Music Course (September 2005 - June 2006). I didn't actually get the CD with it on until yesterday (25th May 2007). Anyway I told a few people about this roughly a year ago in the Bandamp Chat. Puppet I'm sure you were one of the ones I told :). I really loved writing this song, and after waiting this long to listen to it again (yesterday was the first time I'd heard it myself in nearly a year), I really love listening to it. There are a few problems though. Quality - It's not perfect, but it's listenable. PAGE TURNS! - GAH! Try to ignore them =]. What I would really love would be if someone can help me make a remake of this piece with really good (or at least better) quality. I can play the clarinet part, I need someone to actually notate and play the piano part. I don't have the sheet music for this :(. Anybody good at notating? Haha! I would really love this because I would love to enter it into the UK SONGWRITING CONTEST! Thanks for reading guys and gals, I hope you enjoy this piece of music! Cheers! Pete. Sat, 26 May 2007 15:50:04 -0400 http://forum.bandamp.com/Audio_Review/1013.html This is the full version of 19:15 Keyboard 14, for the clarinet. I recorded it on my mp3 player, so I apologize for the quality of the sound. Hope you like it! Thu, 18 Aug 2005 02:34:55 -0400 http://forum.bandamp.com/Audio_Review/5138.html rrrrr Dealerrrrr Dandy Glimpse Piano Dealer :) Mon, 02 Jul 2007 08:37:53 -0400 http://forum.bandamp.com/Audio_Review/2526.html Yay! Got a chance to use some half decent recording equipment! Here's what I got from it. Sat, 20 May 2006 13:23:23 -0400 http://forum.bandamp.com/Audio_Review/4501.html Took about 2 days to make, and I quite like it :) Also can someone please give this song a genre, I was thinking a form of Popular Song? Thanks. VERSE1 I try to see you I just can't be there all the time I try to meet you But I don't want to let you down BRIDGE You played me You take me I never realised How much you hated me But Now I'm Gone CHORUS But was it my fault that we had never made it? You crushed my hopes and dreams in a single sentance VERSE 2 I thought I knew you I thought I had it all planned out I thought I loved you I never really had a doubt BRIDGE You played me You take me I never realised How much you hated me But Now I'm Gone CHORUS But was it my fault that we had never made it? Crush your hopes and dreams in a single sentance OUTRO I'd like to see you once again I think that I could make things work But I have moved on since then Let's talk about it Let's talk about it Sun, 18 Mar 2007 19:47:38 -0400 http://forum.bandamp.com/Audio_Review/3758.html Just a little improvisation on the keyboard. There's about 1 inverted chord in there, and there's little dynamic variation. Also I apologise for the awful recording quality. Wed, 29 Nov 2006 12:47:22 -0500 http://forum.bandamp.com/Audio_Review/814.html Again I recorded this song on my mp3 player today at 10:00 am (25/07/05). Tell me what you think. Mon, 25 Jul 2005 00:35:44 -0400 http://forum.bandamp.com/Audio_Review/5936.html Just a quick track made and recorded today. Not really sure where to go next, or what to lead into for the chours! Help! :). EDIT: Left the drum loop going at the end lol, just ignore it. Sat, 12 Jan 2008 11:05:34 -0500 http://forum.bandamp.com/Audio_Review/2773.html Memories of a Past Forgotten An instrumental I wrote. Sat, 17 Jun 2006 10:42:39 -0400 http://forum.bandamp.com/Audio_Review/3915.html I did the vocals, but I don't think they're very good :( I didn't play any other instruments. Fri, 22 Dec 2006 13:26:26 -0500 http://forum.bandamp.com/Audio_Review/5883.html This is a one day project, wrote and recorded in one day. Not too long so it won't take much of your time. I probably could have spent more time perfecting it, but I'm going to my Dad's tommorow on Boxing Day, and I'm not going to be able to do it there. Tue, 25 Dec 2007 19:05:40 -0500 http://forum.bandamp.com/Audio_Review/5593.html Yep. Tue, 16 Oct 2007 19:19:51 -0400 http://forum.bandamp.com/Audio_Review/6534.html Superheroes Don't Exist Demo Hope you guys like this. I hope I'm getting better at songwriting. Please don't judge on production e.g. the use of instruments that aren't real and the fact that I recorded my vocals just now at 2.30 in the morning while I have a cold :). I just wanted to get a demo version up before I go on holiday on sunday and we're out tomorrow. I'll have a bit of time to work on this while I'm away so all comments between now and saturday evening are especially welcomed! Thanks for listening! Pete Fri, 27 Jun 2008 22:05:03 -0400 http://forum.bandamp.com/Audio_Review/6467.html A collab with me and TonightsLastSong. You may have listened to it before. This version: Vocals: Petermoncrieff + TonightsLastSong Instruments: Jim Mason + Others at SongMastering.com Mixing: TonightsLastSong Composition: Petermoncrieff :) Good fun. LYRICS: Everyday after school I think of all things I should have said to you I should have told you Third times the charm But I'm not sticking around Too hear your lies again I should have said You said you're sorry Too many times before Now I can't believe Your stories any more You said you're sorry Too many times before Now I can't believe Your stories any more I wish I knew 3 years ago Why I started to Fall in love with you What made me Want to be with The one that I would Grow to hate You said you're sorry Too many times before Now I can't believe Your stories any more You said you're sorry Too many times before Now I can't believe Your stories any more And after all of this All of this You still come crawling back to me And then when you're done When you're done It all comes rushing back to me You said you're sorry Too many times before Now I can't believe Your stories any more You said you're sorry Too many times before Now I can't believe Your stories any more Sun, 01 Jun 2008 08:10:55 -0400 http://forum.bandamp.com/Audio_Review/5240.html Hmmm. Wasn't sure if I liked this at first, but now that I've listened to it a few times I actually really like it! I enjoyed making this one a lot so please comment it and tell me what you think! If you don't like it very much, come back a bit later and listen to it again. If you still don't like it do the same again. If you still don't like if after that, then you're probably not ever going to like it very much. But it's one of those songs that gets better the more you listen to it. Well it was for me anyway :) Thu, 02 Aug 2007 14:34:22 -0400 http://forum.bandamp.com/Audio_Review/5736.html Hey everyone, I just recorded this song. First song which you will have heard me playing guitar in. Tell me what you think. Mon, 19 Nov 2007 19:00:54 -0500 http://forum.bandamp.com/Audio_Review/5261.html Tritonkeyboarder has challenged us to create a song based on a common theme, and Oldies324 has given us the Theme, So, we are to write a song about how we are writing the song we are writing, or something like that. Enjoy! :) Mon, 06 Aug 2007 17:16:58 -0400 http://forum.bandamp.com/Audio_Review/5394.html ...ront Page. Ok so this is the professionally produced version of the boy on the front page. Tell me what you think. Wed, 05 Sep 2007 12:32:28 -0400 http://forum.bandamp.com/Audio_Review/5259.html .. Page Thanks to Jimk for trying the drums but I couldn't get them to fit in the song so I made some using fruityloops :) I changed the instrumentation to guitars, bass, drums and vocals. So yeah tell me what you think :) Lyrics: Everytime when you looked at me You'd always tell me what I can't do But one day I will show you what What I can do what I've become And you'll wish that you had stayed with me And you'll wish that we were meant to be When the whole world sees just what I've done You'll wish that you had stayed With the boy on the front page And you'll wish that you had stayed with me (boy on the front page) And you'll wish that we were meant to be (boy on the front page) When the whole world sees just what I've done (boy on the front page) You'll wish that you had stayed With the boy on the front page Mon, 06 Aug 2007 09:06:36 -0400